I’ve enjoyed some of Joanna Hickson’s previous historical fiction novels, so I was looking forward to reading her latest one, The House of Seymour, which is the first in a new trilogy. Sadly, I found it disappointing and I probably won’t be continuing with the next two books, but there were still enough things to like that I don’t feel I’ve wasted my time.
This book is not about Henry VIII’s wife Jane Seymour as you might expect, but her ancestors – specifically her great-great-grandmother, Isabel Williams, and her husband, John Seymour. We first meet Isabel, the daughter of a wealthy merchant, in 1424 when she becomes betrothed to John, the ambitious Lord of Wolf Hall in Savernake Forest, Wiltshire. From very early in their marriage, it becomes clear that their relationship is not going to be a happy one. John is a cruel and ruthless man preoccupied with political advancement and winning the support of the Duke of Gloucester, protector of the young king, Henry VI.
Isabel finds some solace in her relationship with John’s young cousin Edmund, a much kinder man than her husband, and also a new friendship with Jess, a shepherdess who has been forced to leave her home near the village of Avebury. Jess and a farm hand, Addy (Adhelm), had taken shelter from a storm in the Long Barrow – an ancient burial chamber – only for Addy to disappear without trace. Accused of witchcraft, Jess takes refuge at Easton Priory where she meets Isabel and is given a position in her household.
The narrative is divided mainly between Isabel and Jess, although we also occasionally see things from the perspective of John and other characters. The voices and attitudes of both women felt too modern for my taste – I prefer to feel fully immersed in the period when I read historical fiction – so I couldn’t quite manage to believe in them as convincing 15th century people. As my blogging friend Jessica of The Bookworm Chronicles explains in her review, even using the name Jess is an anachronism.
I did love the setting – or rather settings, as there are two main ones. The first is Wolf Hall, or Wulfhall to use the spelling of the time, which becomes home to Isabel’s family after John inherits the wardenship of Savernake Forest. The other is Avebury, an atmospheric place with its Neolithic stone circles, ancient barrows and monuments. Although the characters do sometimes cross paths with members of the royal court, most of the book takes place in these two settings and the surrounding areas so the focus is mostly on Isabel’s household and Jess and her family. The problem here is that none of the characters really came to life for me and most of them lacked depth. The book as a whole felt a lot lighter and less substantial than Hickson’s other recent ones.
Although I didn’t enjoy this book as much as I would have liked, it was still good to learn a little bit about the Seymour family and their history. I’m probably not going to read the second book when it comes out, but I’ll be interested to hear whether it’s stronger than this one.
Thanks to HarperCollins for providing a copy of this book for review via NetGalley.
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This is on my Amazon wishlist. I think I’ll wait until the price comes down!
I would have been disappointed if I’d paid the full price for it!
Names are so important, and it’s so easy to find out whether a particular one was used at a certain period (the Oxford Dictionary of Names is handy here), yet people make this sort of mistake time and time again, and it jolts me right out of the book. Sloppy research!
Yes, there’s no excuse for it as it’s such an easy thing to check!
It’s a shame that this didn’t live up to your expectations. I do agree that historical fiction especially when based on real people needs to feel authentic and it’s jarring if modern aspects such as names or inaccurate attitudes creep in.
Yes, this felt too modern for the period and also a lot lighter than her last few books, almost as if it was written for a younger audience, although I don’t think it was.
That’s a shame. Sounds to me like the last book will be about Jane, but the author got carried away with all her history and ended up doing this as a trilogy. That’s one way to get a three-book deal!
Yes, I think that’s the idea of it. The problem is, Jane’s ancestors just don’t seem to have been very interesting!
Too bad that you didn’t like it so much. I loved Hickson’s first books but the two about Joan Vaux were a bit less to my taste, but I thought it was because of the time period that I already so much about. This setting sounds interesting and I don’t bother too much about names so I might give it a chance.
I think this book feels more like her early books rather than the Joan Vaux ones, so maybe you’ll like it better. I did love the setting!
At least you liked the setting and learned something. Though I’m sorry this one was a bit of a disappointment.
Yes, there were still lots of positive things about this book, even though it was disappointing overall.
Thank you for mention, Helen. 🙂 Comparing our reviews, we seem to have had almost identical thoughts on this one.
Having read a few other reviews of this book as well, it seems that a lot of us felt the same way about it and had problems with the weak characters and modern attitudes. It’s a shame as I loved her last two books about Joan Vaux.
Im so sorry to hear that this one didn’t work for you, the premise sounds interesting, especially the accusations of witchcraft, but I could definitely see the modernity of certain characters grating on me too. Its always disheartening when an author you’ve enjoyed before let’s you down.
It did sound like an interesting premise, but the weak characterisation and modern attitudes spoiled it for me. I probably won’t be reading the rest of the trilogy, but will see what she writes next after that.
What a shame this one didn’t work better for you!
Thanks for sharing this review with the Historical Fiction Reading Challenge!